heres my awful paper.. :(
i like my topic i feel like its pretty solid but i need to support why i think its good and positive for businesses. i need to work on my thesis statement and make it stronger.I don't even think i have a full thesis statement yet. kinda just a cluster of thoughts.
um i hate it... i don't like any of it right now it needs way way way more work. I wish i had more time its not even finished.
i haven't put Shirky's argument in on social networking so i have 3 pages of actual text, averaging out to be 1000 words short of what we need so luckily i have time to fix and finish because i'm gonna need it.
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